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Saturday 8 September 2018

The Soldier


Flashes of white light, illuminated the benighted sky,
Followed by the familiar discordant tune of artillery and guns,
Amidst the destruction remains a soldier, although injured, with grit,
Knowing his life would go on to save his son.

Faint wisps resurfaced, of the day he once left home,
His son had begged him, but his face revealed no condole,
"I have to do what I can, I have to help the men',
Oh, what he would do, to see his son's face again.

The incessant firing, now grimly music to his ears,
Ceased, allowing him and the soldiers, a moment of shock,
For on the ground bounced a seemingly harmless grenade,
And in an instant, the soldiers' faces were close to that of chalk.

Steeling his face once more, the soldier knew what had to be done,
Landing protectively on the grenade, and dropped his gun,
He gave a knowing smile to his comrades, a silent farewell,
And his hands drifted to his heart, wherein he hid a picture of his son.

How many more fathers, and mothers, and children,
Were lost, in fighting 'the greater fight',
Giving up their lives, for a stranger; unknown-,
A simple 'Thank You', shouldn't suffice.

We owe you our gratitude, our lives, our respect,
And thank, each and every gallant knight,
For because of your valiant service and sacrifice,
We are here today, healthy, safe, and alive.

-OceanGrapher


11 comments:

  1. Well written. Keep writing

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  2. It is live and full of emotions. Great skills to have packed so much of it in few lines. Keep up the habit of reading and writing especially when you are going to be hard pressed for time as you go forward.

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  3. This is well written - very heart warming. Keep it up!!

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  4. You are a very creative thinker and this is well written...it touched my heart. Keep it up! :)

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  5. Very beautifully written. Keep up the good work..

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  7. Very well articulated..A poem is best when the reader is able to imagine and visualise the scene and connect to it ,and your one made me do so.
    Also the last verse was thought provoking as it left me thinking about the real sacrifice the soldiers do for all and all about the pangs of separation.
    Great piece ..keep writing more!!
    One suggestion ,when you write poems like these ,it's always good to give a little more detail about the background.For ex : rocky snow clad mountain - symbolising the hardship , a river rustling by- symbolising the sailing of time or life ,1 distant scorched tree- symbolising his wounded lonely self still fighting for survival.. Such small details can easily help the readers travel to where you want to take them...
    Looking forward to lot more writings from you..Happy writing!! :)

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  8. Great work. Very well articulated and touching. Keep it up.
    Looking for more!! All the best

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  9. Really heart touching and amazingly portrayed the actual feelings into words.. Keep up the good work. Looking for more !!!

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  10. Seems you have given words to our feelings....very well written poem...keep writing!!!

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